As the sunliight warmed the place, the gang stirred awake. Within seconds, they began to look around frantically, only to be disappointed; Zahira and Firdaus were still not back. The girls remained stationed and silent. "I think we should all grab something to eat and began the search" Baihakki voiced out. No one moved or responded. "Come on! We have to do something! While we waste time here, they could be out there starving in whatver condition!" Baihakki exclaimed. Deborah burst into tears. Nisa and Nadera comforted her. "...I guess you are right. But i am in no mood to eat. Lets start searching immediately" Legolas said. Even Baihakki did not object. As they got up and were about to plan their next move, they heard voices. ''SSHHH!!!" Vikram hushed the gang. They stood dead silent, listening...."GUYS!!!" the voices said. "The back!" Legolas shouted. The gang ran out of the hospital and made their way to the back. Then they stopped. Out of the forest they saw to figurs, a guy and girl completely coverd in ssoot and dirt running towards them. "It's them!" Deborah exclaimed. They ran towards each other and exhanged hugs ireegardless of the dirty conditions Zahira and Firdaus was in. Immediately Firdaus and Zahira started talking "Oh my god you wouldn't believe i was.." "SSSHHHH" Vikram silenced them. Everyone listened. "I think we should all get back and wash up, gather back on the first floor with our stuff and settle down to eat. Then we will talk" Vikram said. The rest agreed.
"Wow a secret tunnel...must have tooked the prisoners a lot of determination to make it that far!" Nadera said. "Yes salutes to them..but what about the dead bones?" Firdaus said. "I...think those were real..real toture" Vikram said. "Well i hope more souls escaped out alive then totured or burned to death!" Deborah commented.
The gang silently agreed. "Shall we go now? I am drained!" Zahira moaned. "Yes...and lets all take cab..i can't afford a long bus journey" Firdaus said. "Not to our homes surely! In this condition? My mum would think i got into a fight!" Zahira said looking at herself. "Hmm..ok you can all camp over a short while at my house to clean up. There is no one at home now till evening" Vikram said. "Alright then can we watch the new movie that was just released by you? I am never bored of it seriously!" Nadera said. "Haiz yes whatever" Vikram said yawning. So they packed and made their way into cabs, 4 in each, to Vikram's house. Upon arrival they cleaned up and finally settled down to watch the movie...
"Hey Vikram! Guys wake up!". "Huh..what?" Vikram woke up, feeling confused. It was his mum. "Wow ALL of you dozed off? Even you Vikram? I thought your friends loved the movie! His mum commented. "Oh no auntie..haha we were just tired. We urr...met up early today to have fun" Nadera said. She turned to the gang and gave a cheeky smile, only to find everyone doing the same!
THE END :)
Thursday, August 4, 2011
Chapter 7
"Owww..." Zahira rubbed her head as she got up. It was pitch black but from the light shining from the torch, she made out a long tunnel ahead of her which was small enough to only crawl through. She picked up the torch, "Hey girls..." Zahira said and turned around, only to find herself facing an empty wall made of earth. She shined the torch around. The tunnel was entirely out of earth and it seemd to stretch on forever. There was no door or point of entry. She shined the torch up, and found a huge plank, big enough for someone to fall through..."damn silly me!" she moaned. With no other alterative, she began to crawl along the tunnel with the torch in-between her teeth. As she crawled, she realised she was going down, deeper and deeper, the air seemd to get tighter. As she started to get out of breath she paused. Ahead of her she saw a corner. But before she could ponder further, she held her breath as from a distance round the corner, she began to hear shuffling noises and low shallow breathing...someone was coming...
"FUCK!" Firdaus exclaimed. Around him was total darkness. "DAMN i should have been smarter than to think they tried to climb into the chimney..now i am stuck!". Firdaus tried to grope his way around. When he groped at his side, he felt a handle. "That's strange..." Firdaus pulled the handle. Suddenly the plank next to him opened and he fell through. Firdaus screamed like crazy but it was a short fall and he fell through into the back of the chimney. It was pitch black. Unable to find the plank back, Firdaus groped around. All he felt was earth. The bones found in the chimney suddenly crept into his mind. "Bones..now earth...oh god oh god...". He felt a path infront of him small enough to crawl through. So picking himself up and trying not to think what he could feel next or bumb into next, he used his hnads and crawled his way forward. "Seems like a tunnel" Firdaus thought to himself. As he crawled, his senses told him the tunnel was sloping downwards. After a very long walk he bumbed into an empty wall of earth. But his hands and feet came into contact with another plank. Upon groping, it was simply a wooden board. He lifted it up using its handle. Down the hole he could barely see anything but usig his feet, he felt footholds. "God..deeper down?" he thought. He slowly made his way down and landed on earth again. From here he groped around and found a similair straight path through. So he began crawling again. Upon crawling further he started to see a bit of light. As he continued, he began to hear noises of scruffling and breathing...just like his. Firdaus's heart was beating so fast he felt he could puke it out. But taking up courage he continued crawling towards the light. As it grew brighter, it looked like a beam of light emitting from...he crawled faster and reached a corner. He turned the corner and...
Zahira was too scared to move. Someone was coming through. She crawled backwards as fast as she could but the person was too fast. A head appeared.."AAAAHHHH!!!". Firdaus screamed too and then suddenly, uopn realisation, they cried out in relief and hugged each other. "OMG i thought you were a zombie!!!" Firdaus screamed. "And i thought you were..something not normal!" Zahira moaned. Each quickly exchanged their side of the story. "So what do you think this tunnel is?" Firdaus asked. "You know what..i think its an escape tunnel" Zahira said. Firdaus looked at Zahira in surprise. "Hmm...actually you could be right! Come on let's keep going!". So the both of them continued crawling and pretty soon they found themselves going upslope. Finally their heads bumbed into a rock. "Help me move it" Zahira asked. Together they moved the rock. A huge hole was exposed and sunlight was pouring in. They crawled out to find themselves in the outside world, breathing fresh air. They looked around and seemed to be in a forest. "I think this is the back of the OCH!" Firdaus exclaimed. "Come on lets go back to the rest" Zahira said excitedly.
"FUCK!" Firdaus exclaimed. Around him was total darkness. "DAMN i should have been smarter than to think they tried to climb into the chimney..now i am stuck!". Firdaus tried to grope his way around. When he groped at his side, he felt a handle. "That's strange..." Firdaus pulled the handle. Suddenly the plank next to him opened and he fell through. Firdaus screamed like crazy but it was a short fall and he fell through into the back of the chimney. It was pitch black. Unable to find the plank back, Firdaus groped around. All he felt was earth. The bones found in the chimney suddenly crept into his mind. "Bones..now earth...oh god oh god...". He felt a path infront of him small enough to crawl through. So picking himself up and trying not to think what he could feel next or bumb into next, he used his hnads and crawled his way forward. "Seems like a tunnel" Firdaus thought to himself. As he crawled, his senses told him the tunnel was sloping downwards. After a very long walk he bumbed into an empty wall of earth. But his hands and feet came into contact with another plank. Upon groping, it was simply a wooden board. He lifted it up using its handle. Down the hole he could barely see anything but usig his feet, he felt footholds. "God..deeper down?" he thought. He slowly made his way down and landed on earth again. From here he groped around and found a similair straight path through. So he began crawling again. Upon crawling further he started to see a bit of light. As he continued, he began to hear noises of scruffling and breathing...just like his. Firdaus's heart was beating so fast he felt he could puke it out. But taking up courage he continued crawling towards the light. As it grew brighter, it looked like a beam of light emitting from...he crawled faster and reached a corner. He turned the corner and...
Zahira was too scared to move. Someone was coming through. She crawled backwards as fast as she could but the person was too fast. A head appeared.."AAAAHHHH!!!". Firdaus screamed too and then suddenly, uopn realisation, they cried out in relief and hugged each other. "OMG i thought you were a zombie!!!" Firdaus screamed. "And i thought you were..something not normal!" Zahira moaned. Each quickly exchanged their side of the story. "So what do you think this tunnel is?" Firdaus asked. "You know what..i think its an escape tunnel" Zahira said. Firdaus looked at Zahira in surprise. "Hmm...actually you could be right! Come on let's keep going!". So the both of them continued crawling and pretty soon they found themselves going upslope. Finally their heads bumbed into a rock. "Help me move it" Zahira asked. Together they moved the rock. A huge hole was exposed and sunlight was pouring in. They crawled out to find themselves in the outside world, breathing fresh air. They looked around and seemed to be in a forest. "I think this is the back of the OCH!" Firdaus exclaimed. "Come on lets go back to the rest" Zahira said excitedly.
Sunday, June 12, 2011
Chapter 6
A very strong cold gush of wind blew into them from the room. The boys almost screamed in shock but they held their breaths. "Woah..shit! God I hope it only blew at us and not the whole hospital!" Vikram said nervously, trying to keep calm. "URM..must be only us..maybe this room has no windows..so all the locked air..letsss..lets check it out" Firdaus said and turned on his torch. He shined it into the room. The room was empty and like he predicted, there were no windows. "See, no windows..so all the air trapped.." Firdaus said, trying to reason it out although he had no clue if such a science was possible. They stepped in. Just like the Staff lounge, they had to round the corner to see the chimney. "Yup, you were right Legolas. This is the main burning room. The ashes and all are still here" Baihakki said. "What are in the ashes?" Legolas asked. The guys looked too. There were bits of visible white among the ashes. Using his arrow, he cleared the ashes and what they saw were....
HUH! Nadera woke up with a shock. Within seconds, the other 3 girls rushed into her room gasping. "Guys are missing! Gush of wind!" they all said at the same time. "SHHH!! Calm down..i know I know..i felt the chilly wind too!...where are the guys?!" Nadera moaned. "Dang! They must have gone exploring on their own those assholes!" Zahirah complained. "God but where? The basement?" Deborah asked. "I don't know..must be, the only place left. Damn who knows they also plan to put stuff there so that tomorrow when we go they can scare us and act like they dont know anything! Assholes!" Nisa said. "I say we go find them" Zahirah said. The rest were a bit hesitant but eventually agreed. They collected their torches and made their way down the stairs all the way to the basement. "Huh..a door to the basement..funny they didn't just make the basement and open hallway or room" Nadera said as they reached the bottom of the stairs and found a door. "Oh god this place is fing creepy..the toture chamber is here too..oh God and its night time!" Nisa moaned. "Relax...we are together arent we?" Zahira re-assured, though she was trembling on her own. Holding each other hands with one, they pushed the door open together with the other...
"OH MY GOD" Legolas said. What they saw were bones..real life bones..human bones. "Someone was burned here.." Firdaus said. "But who? Whatever it is historians would have certainly cleared this stuff.." Legolas said. "Unless like the girls said..this was MEANT to be locked.."Vikram said. "But we easily could temper with the lockhow come historians couldn't?" Baihakki said. They merely stared at each other for the next few seconds, each with horror written on their faces. Firdaus reacted first. "Well..no point thinking of that. We have already entered...might as well.." Firdaus said. "Ya..but there is nothing here other then this chimney, just an empty room" Vikram said. "True..LLets go back" Baihakki suggested quickly. The guys agreed without a fuss.
They closed the door behind them (they couldnt seem to lock it back and so abandoned attempt to lock it) and made their way back to the second floor quietly. They entered their rooms, only to find the girls missing. "SHIT! They woke up! Oh no where are they now??!!" Firdaus asked fearfully. "GIRLS!!!!???" Vikram yelled at the top of his voice. The girls were however too far away to hear the scream. They walked along the long tunnel of the basement. "This tunnel truly reminds me of those horror mystery movies" Deborah said. They walked and finally reached the end. They turned the corner and walked further to meet a large metal door, which was already fairly open. "GGGGuys?" Nadera stammered. "Look if this is your idea of a joke, I swear to God please don't. Please come out now" Nisa begged. There was no reply. "Maybe it was already open like this?" Zahira asked. Together they pushed open the metal door fully and shined their torches. They had truly come to the torture chamber.
*The walls were made of thick solid concrete and unpainted. Further inside was some concrete built-up structure as if it was used for securing something tight on the floor. There were metal chains with one end set loose and the other end securely fixed on the wall. It seemed strong enough to tie up a tiger. Maroon colored blood stains were seen on the floor. "You know...i think these stains are real" Nadera whispered. The girls nodded. Suddenly a very sudden strong chill ran down their backs and they heard a voice screaming at high pitch.
*This was directly lifted from the website I provided under introduction.
"Dammit no reply!" Baihakki said, hopping on the spot in nervousness. "Oh no this is all my fault!" Firdaus moaned. "All of you relax. We all agreed to this so we share the responsibility. Lets split up; there are four of us. I shall search the last floor and the rooftop, Firdaus you take the 3rd, Legolas the second and Baihakki the first. We all meet Baihakki at the first floor after our search..with or without girls. If no one found them, they could only be at the basement and we shall go there together" Vikram suggested. The rest agreed and began their search. Baihakki quicky ran down the steps in twos to reach the first floor. He ran to the furthest corner of the hallway and stopped. He then began to look into every room, calling the girls name. Upon the third room, he heard the girls screams, coming from the stairs. He quickly ran towards the stairs in fear and knocked into Nisa, Nadera and Deborah running up the stairs. They hugged each other in fear and Baihakki tried to calm all of them down. "Oh God I am glad you guys are alright! Where is Zahira?" Baihakki asked. The girls looked behind.
"Oh no..she was the last as we were running. We were too scared to look behind and we each just screamed and ran towards here. Oh no oh no.." Nadera said and started to cry. "Oh shit..k calm down..i will go and.." "NO!" the girls protested. "I am so sorry. We know it's Zahira but you cannot go alone..wwwee..wweee..hheard a scream when we were at the toture chamber. We even felt a chill, like there is really something there. That's why we screamed and ran here. Whatever it is we have to go together..where are the rest?" Deborah asked, sobbing herself. "Oh man..they are looking at the other floors for you..how do you expect me to wait for..oh man fine..they shouldn't take too long..Baihakki said. He was right. Just then, Vikram and Legolas came running down the stairs. Oh thank God you found them! Vikram exclaimed. Wheres Firdaus?! Deborah asked. I think hes still searching.wheres Zahira?! Legolas asked. Baihakki explained to them as the girls were too dumbfounded to say anything. Nadera and Nisa immediately went to Vikram and Legolas respectively.
Deborah merely leaned on Baihakki for support. Seconds passed and Firdaus was not in sight. "Dammit. I will go see. You all stay here" Legolas said and ran up to check. Within minutes he ran down to meet them. "He's gone...the doors' open" Legolas said, looking at the guys. The guys stared back, dumbfounded. "GONE?!! What door!?" Deborah exclaimed. Legolas, having no other choice, explained Firdaus plan to check out the room without the girls knowledge and of what they saw there and of how they returned back to see that the girls were missing. "When we left the room, we closed the door. We couldn't lock it though..but I swear we closed it. It was open now when I checked. I entered but he was not inside at all" Legolas panted. The girls just continued to cry harder. "Dammit..maybe he went up to the fourth floor? Look I think he is alright. Maybe he did go up to other floors for some fucked up reason after you guys ran down here. But now we must REALLY go and save Zahirah" Baihakki begged. "You are right. Maybe one of us stays here to wwait.." "I'll stay Deborah said.
The rest had no words to refuse. "Ok..take care..we will be back. Anything just shout ok?" Baihakki said. So Deborah sat on the stairs and waited for Firdaus while the rest made their way down. The door to the basement was surprisingly closed. Baihakki tried to open the door but it seemed lock. "Oh my God..its the ghost! Zah.." Nisa said and cried further. "LLet me try" Legolas said. He stepped in front and tried to unlock it with the same arrow he used earlier. But there was no click. The door wouldnt budge. "Break it down!" Vikram shouted and with that, stepped in front and banged into the door with his body. The rest also tried banging onto the door but the door remained firm and shut. "ZAHIRAH!!!!" Baihakki screamed, hoping the voice would travel through the door. He placed his ears under the small hole at the door. But he heard no reply. "Oh my..oh my..i cannot believe this.."
As Deborah saw the rest coming back, still with no Zahira, she remained silent, afraid of asking and hearing the worse. The rest also seeing Deborah alone with no Firdaus understood the reality. "Me and the rest of the guys will go up to search the floors. You girls go to my room and wait there for us" Vikram said. The girls agreed without any disapproval. So they all made their way up. The girls entered the room, sat down and huddled together while the guys searched the whole hospital. Baihakki even tried to enter the basement a second time but the door remained shut. The guys came back. "Outside?" Deborah asked. "Cant be...I doubt so. But don't ask me if he's not outside then where else...I just know..he wont be outside" Legolas said. "Ya..i went to the deck and shouted from there..no reply" Vikram said. "I tried the door again..still wont budge" Baihakki said defeatedly. All hope seemed to be lost. The guys just sat down with the girls, huddling..hoping...
HUH! Nadera woke up with a shock. Within seconds, the other 3 girls rushed into her room gasping. "Guys are missing! Gush of wind!" they all said at the same time. "SHHH!! Calm down..i know I know..i felt the chilly wind too!...where are the guys?!" Nadera moaned. "Dang! They must have gone exploring on their own those assholes!" Zahirah complained. "God but where? The basement?" Deborah asked. "I don't know..must be, the only place left. Damn who knows they also plan to put stuff there so that tomorrow when we go they can scare us and act like they dont know anything! Assholes!" Nisa said. "I say we go find them" Zahirah said. The rest were a bit hesitant but eventually agreed. They collected their torches and made their way down the stairs all the way to the basement. "Huh..a door to the basement..funny they didn't just make the basement and open hallway or room" Nadera said as they reached the bottom of the stairs and found a door. "Oh god this place is fing creepy..the toture chamber is here too..oh God and its night time!" Nisa moaned. "Relax...we are together arent we?" Zahira re-assured, though she was trembling on her own. Holding each other hands with one, they pushed the door open together with the other...
"OH MY GOD" Legolas said. What they saw were bones..real life bones..human bones. "Someone was burned here.." Firdaus said. "But who? Whatever it is historians would have certainly cleared this stuff.." Legolas said. "Unless like the girls said..this was MEANT to be locked.."Vikram said. "But we easily could temper with the lockhow come historians couldn't?" Baihakki said. They merely stared at each other for the next few seconds, each with horror written on their faces. Firdaus reacted first. "Well..no point thinking of that. We have already entered...might as well.." Firdaus said. "Ya..but there is nothing here other then this chimney, just an empty room" Vikram said. "True..LLets go back" Baihakki suggested quickly. The guys agreed without a fuss.
They closed the door behind them (they couldnt seem to lock it back and so abandoned attempt to lock it) and made their way back to the second floor quietly. They entered their rooms, only to find the girls missing. "SHIT! They woke up! Oh no where are they now??!!" Firdaus asked fearfully. "GIRLS!!!!???" Vikram yelled at the top of his voice. The girls were however too far away to hear the scream. They walked along the long tunnel of the basement. "This tunnel truly reminds me of those horror mystery movies" Deborah said. They walked and finally reached the end. They turned the corner and walked further to meet a large metal door, which was already fairly open. "GGGGuys?" Nadera stammered. "Look if this is your idea of a joke, I swear to God please don't. Please come out now" Nisa begged. There was no reply. "Maybe it was already open like this?" Zahira asked. Together they pushed open the metal door fully and shined their torches. They had truly come to the torture chamber.
*The walls were made of thick solid concrete and unpainted. Further inside was some concrete built-up structure as if it was used for securing something tight on the floor. There were metal chains with one end set loose and the other end securely fixed on the wall. It seemed strong enough to tie up a tiger. Maroon colored blood stains were seen on the floor. "You know...i think these stains are real" Nadera whispered. The girls nodded. Suddenly a very sudden strong chill ran down their backs and they heard a voice screaming at high pitch.
*This was directly lifted from the website I provided under introduction.
"Dammit no reply!" Baihakki said, hopping on the spot in nervousness. "Oh no this is all my fault!" Firdaus moaned. "All of you relax. We all agreed to this so we share the responsibility. Lets split up; there are four of us. I shall search the last floor and the rooftop, Firdaus you take the 3rd, Legolas the second and Baihakki the first. We all meet Baihakki at the first floor after our search..with or without girls. If no one found them, they could only be at the basement and we shall go there together" Vikram suggested. The rest agreed and began their search. Baihakki quicky ran down the steps in twos to reach the first floor. He ran to the furthest corner of the hallway and stopped. He then began to look into every room, calling the girls name. Upon the third room, he heard the girls screams, coming from the stairs. He quickly ran towards the stairs in fear and knocked into Nisa, Nadera and Deborah running up the stairs. They hugged each other in fear and Baihakki tried to calm all of them down. "Oh God I am glad you guys are alright! Where is Zahira?" Baihakki asked. The girls looked behind.
"Oh no..she was the last as we were running. We were too scared to look behind and we each just screamed and ran towards here. Oh no oh no.." Nadera said and started to cry. "Oh shit..k calm down..i will go and.." "NO!" the girls protested. "I am so sorry. We know it's Zahira but you cannot go alone..wwwee..wweee..hheard a scream when we were at the toture chamber. We even felt a chill, like there is really something there. That's why we screamed and ran here. Whatever it is we have to go together..where are the rest?" Deborah asked, sobbing herself. "Oh man..they are looking at the other floors for you..how do you expect me to wait for..oh man fine..they shouldn't take too long..Baihakki said. He was right. Just then, Vikram and Legolas came running down the stairs. Oh thank God you found them! Vikram exclaimed. Wheres Firdaus?! Deborah asked. I think hes still searching.wheres Zahira?! Legolas asked. Baihakki explained to them as the girls were too dumbfounded to say anything. Nadera and Nisa immediately went to Vikram and Legolas respectively.
Deborah merely leaned on Baihakki for support. Seconds passed and Firdaus was not in sight. "Dammit. I will go see. You all stay here" Legolas said and ran up to check. Within minutes he ran down to meet them. "He's gone...the doors' open" Legolas said, looking at the guys. The guys stared back, dumbfounded. "GONE?!! What door!?" Deborah exclaimed. Legolas, having no other choice, explained Firdaus plan to check out the room without the girls knowledge and of what they saw there and of how they returned back to see that the girls were missing. "When we left the room, we closed the door. We couldn't lock it though..but I swear we closed it. It was open now when I checked. I entered but he was not inside at all" Legolas panted. The girls just continued to cry harder. "Dammit..maybe he went up to the fourth floor? Look I think he is alright. Maybe he did go up to other floors for some fucked up reason after you guys ran down here. But now we must REALLY go and save Zahirah" Baihakki begged. "You are right. Maybe one of us stays here to wwait.." "I'll stay Deborah said.
The rest had no words to refuse. "Ok..take care..we will be back. Anything just shout ok?" Baihakki said. So Deborah sat on the stairs and waited for Firdaus while the rest made their way down. The door to the basement was surprisingly closed. Baihakki tried to open the door but it seemed lock. "Oh my God..its the ghost! Zah.." Nisa said and cried further. "LLet me try" Legolas said. He stepped in front and tried to unlock it with the same arrow he used earlier. But there was no click. The door wouldnt budge. "Break it down!" Vikram shouted and with that, stepped in front and banged into the door with his body. The rest also tried banging onto the door but the door remained firm and shut. "ZAHIRAH!!!!" Baihakki screamed, hoping the voice would travel through the door. He placed his ears under the small hole at the door. But he heard no reply. "Oh my..oh my..i cannot believe this.."
As Deborah saw the rest coming back, still with no Zahira, she remained silent, afraid of asking and hearing the worse. The rest also seeing Deborah alone with no Firdaus understood the reality. "Me and the rest of the guys will go up to search the floors. You girls go to my room and wait there for us" Vikram said. The girls agreed without any disapproval. So they all made their way up. The girls entered the room, sat down and huddled together while the guys searched the whole hospital. Baihakki even tried to enter the basement a second time but the door remained shut. The guys came back. "Outside?" Deborah asked. "Cant be...I doubt so. But don't ask me if he's not outside then where else...I just know..he wont be outside" Legolas said. "Ya..i went to the deck and shouted from there..no reply" Vikram said. "I tried the door again..still wont budge" Baihakki said defeatedly. All hope seemed to be lost. The guys just sat down with the girls, huddling..hoping...
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